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Hong Yee: Ji Won, i think the part about the long body thingy a bit wrong. The long body does not digest poison, its smth in the body that digests poison. The long body part is too vague.The part of the black skin thingy should say how the blackskin keeps it warm, not just saying that the black skin will keep it warm. N i think you should add in more adaptations. a bit too little.
Sarah: What about defence mechanisms?
Yi Yin: I think ur organism still looks alot like a pen. Never really change alot.
Conghui: i think the camouflage part should be white in colour cos tundra biome is very cold so there should be a lot of snow unless that organisms lives only in dark places
Bohui: I think that rather than having a skin that traps air, you could have a thick layer of fur to trap air, and the skin can be filled with fats to keep the organism warm.
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